Poor Twilight! ! Poem by Sandhya S.N

Poor Twilight! !

Rating: 5.0


Have you seen the glittering stars?
Around the Sun which sparkle more
All are having simple plan.
To make the Sun her own star;

He is simply smiling at;
With his usual glowing face.
Is he dark or sparkling white?
I can’t make out it so clear.

Stars around thinks so clear
That he loves at, each one fair
So they go on rolling round;
Lest they will reach him last.

Have U seen the black star their?
Rolling with an awful goal
She had reached him earlier for
Making him as her own star

Poor star! ! She could not stand
In the sparkling rays of sun
She feared it as, to be her end
And went off without, tell a word

Hey! Struggling little stars;
To reach him U may find easy
But…
To survive you will feel it hard
Because he is very creative! !

He will burn U with his love
Which is hotter than his rays! !
But you don’t feel that burning tint
B’cause he is very sweet!

I will say U one Secret.
No one knows it until now!
He too had a secret love!
She in no one, but twilight!
He takes his journey all the day.
Towards her to burn her too..,
But when he reaches near her
He can’t burn her! Not at all!

Ha! We can see him sweet!
At the time of dusking feel!
Don’t U see the star twilight?
She is happy than her beauty.

Poor twilight! !
She too had a throbbing curse
Not to reach her Sun at all
So she stands with smiling face!
Though her heart is flaming hard

But both are happy to, be together!
And have a smile at each other!
They are patient to wait until!
Next twilight to come so near!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jithesh Premachandran 17 December 2012

great work, an unsaid story of passion and love between sun and twilight.... wonderful imagination which pierced in to my heart...

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Nooruddeen Mm 18 May 2009

Poor Twilight, how long she has to wait to join with her love….? If both are happy to be joined, they why this delay? ? ? A good poem. Congratulations

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Subroto Chatterjee 08 April 2009

Thanks for sharing your secret dreams. Deep expressed feelings on the rampage. Cheers. Subroto

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premji premji 09 March 2009

your name and twilight...what a wonderful connection..........

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Thomas Viruvelil 03 February 2009

A good poetic imagination.But I think you have to read more and learn to express feelings and thoughts with lesser words

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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