Touch Me Not; But Leave Me Not; Poem by Sandhya S.N

very well written Sandhya 10+

Such a beautiful eloquent poem written with soft mood and tone....10+++++

Very lovely poem and so emotional.10+

Nice one Sandhya, but I expect a deeper one from u, not just like everybody write, something more deeper like when u read u r touched at heart.

A nice poem, Sandhya. I really enjoyed its reading. Some lines are very beautiful and meaningful. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work! Best Wishes. Naseer

Sort of looking at both sides of the coin at once.

Ah, woman. Make up your mind! Nice touch of inherent contradictions in humans (includes men too!) . Cheers. Subroto

but your poem touch me nice poem 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

This is the best of your poems, that I've read, Sandhya, even though there are still a couple of double exclamation marks in it. What your heroine says in this poem reminds me of a woman who leads a man on, makes him think she wants him to make love to her, and when he begins, she rebuffs his advances. That may or may not be an accurate assessment of this poem, but it's not too far from being so. Still, this is a well written poem, and one who's closing is appealing.

This is very beatiful, Sandhya. I love the fit between the title and poem Very nice.