Pondering The Disposal Poem by Scotty Dogg

Pondering The Disposal

Rating: 3.2


Steel blades in a dark
hole.
Food gets smushed.
Put your fingers in;
flip the switch.
Bones crunch. Flesh
grinds.
Smiling pain teeth;
push harder.
Make rut nubs for
your private.
Lotsa blood down the
drain.
Deep breath:
on your knees now.
Soaking a paper
towel. Just for
fun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sidi Mahtrow 05 February 2012

Dick Philips called it the hog Cause it et everything Bones and all Or jus a flush off the plates. Course if yo had a real hog It'd be more better cause You cud eat it in the end. s

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Bulletcookie 2017 20 December 2011

Images like this is what keeps the finger free to write good poems. Nice!

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

[Dark/ scary] but well-written! ! !

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Silentpoet Grl 08 December 2011

this is dark and very descriptive- really imaginative - great write

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Crimson Love 06 December 2011

This is quite a scary poem, but its sort of my thing, beautifully written, with very vivid images. Great job. :)

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The Potato Fields, Indiana
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