Cubs Vs Cardinals Poem by Scotty Dogg

Cubs Vs Cardinals

Rating: 3.1


Through a concrete gate opening
the green field revealed itself.
I remember the white lines too.
Organ music smells hotdog smiles.
Dad held my hand as we floated
to our seats and Curt Flood threw
me a ball and it knocked over a
Beer. Splash! Some got us wet.
The game was crawling as I
watched peanuts fly by and fans
pass down some money, man.
“YO! GETCHA BEER HERE! ” and
Bob Gibson hit some poor guy
and the guy limped to first.
We all sang baseball! And the
next thing I knew we were all
floating to our cars and I slept
on the way home. I heard sirens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 December 2013

Woah nice interesting way u relate d sporty narrative. So were they police sirens? Hey n pls answer my riddles poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

the typical scene at and after..it happens everywhere!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 August 2012

the past remebering...so nice and also it's written professionaly good!

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Bulletcookie 2017 20 December 2011

Thanks for the Haiku!

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