Poetic Expression 1 Poem by Poetic Sky

Poetic Expression 1

Rating: 4.6


Dust of past will settle
Stop the fan of memory
Let the rays of hope enter
Through the window of present

No fish can swim in the pond of ice
Let it melt with the heat of peace
Relationships are for strengthening
Not for the strangulation

Tuesday, November 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 10 November 2020

Dust of past will settle Stop the fan of memory Let the rays of hope enter Through the window of present/// wow excellent poetic expression

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 November 2020

Well expressed. Agreed no fish can swim in ice water. Great metaphor

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Chinedu Dike 10 November 2020

An insightful rendition set aside for deep reflective thought. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 November 2020

'Relationships are for strengthening Not for the strangulation' - exactly! Nice wods fell form a 'Lovely Sky'!

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Indira Renganathan 18 February 2023

'Relationships are for strengthening Not for the strangulation'....kudos, kudos poet...congratulations

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David Wood 05 December 2021

Lovely words of hope and love. A good 5*

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2021

Nice ideas on life, on how to live. But, better said than practiced.

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2021

Wonderful poem with great expression.

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

I just am speechless to your elloquent expression. Indeed relationship are to be strengthened not srangulated. Great admirations gor your sound words and understanding. Another into my favourite

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