Sunday, May 6, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

A house
beside a shady tree
and tarred road
heaped up stones
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Raveendran N.V.
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Alison Cassidy 06 February 2008

This is stunning Raveendran! Bold images rich with experience. Evocative, richly rewarding penning. I agree with Max. The last lines are superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Max Reif 29 July 2007

I love those last lines, which you set up well with your earlier, descriptive stanzas.

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Peter Stavropoulos 19 July 2007

Excellent poem, well thought out, with deep themes. I enjoyed reading this very much.

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Patricia Bankhead 12 July 2007

Enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aldo Kraas 27 May 2007

Good Job This is such a wonderful poem I realy enjoyed reading it

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Sandra Fowler 11 May 2007

A fascinating glimpse of what you are seeing from your own personal window on the world. Keep up the good work. Kind regards, Sandra

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Olabode Oluwatayo 10 May 2007

'A house...A gaze...An ever-flowing tree' Well Done! Rave...

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Kee Thampi 07 May 2007

a nice foliage in my mind and in greenish shadow flowering tree grew out of nowhere a poet, a

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