A house
beside a shady tree
and tarred road
heaped up stones
...
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I love those last lines, which you set up well with your earlier, descriptive stanzas.
Excellent poem, well thought out, with deep themes. I enjoyed reading this very much.
A fascinating glimpse of what you are seeing from your own personal window on the world. Keep up the good work. Kind regards, Sandra
'A house...A gaze...An ever-flowing tree' Well Done! Rave...
a nice foliage in my mind and in greenish shadow flowering tree grew out of nowhere a poet, a
This is stunning Raveendran! Bold images rich with experience. Evocative, richly rewarding penning. I agree with Max. The last lines are superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥