Poem Wrote To Me: By A...Friend Poem by God is Good

Poem Wrote To Me: By A...Friend

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I was once a normal kid...
no one cared about me,
or never showed that they did...

Was left alone by my mom and dad....
a family,
or real friends, I never had.

Sitting alone and cry,
is what I'd allways do.
My life was sad,
until I met you.

You took me in,
and loved me the best you could.
Raised me like your own...
still I wonder if that was good.

You took all my hurt away...
and filled my mind with hate....
Turned my heart black...
I'd like to call it fate.

You changed my life around...
no longer do I cry....
I only feel happier now...
But I don't know exactly why...

(supose to be a thankyou 'poem')
ahem...
watev

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted Stevens 01 October 2009

I wouldn't call it a 'thank you' poem... Umm advice: Not so depressong in a 'thankyou' poem... unless its sarcastic ;)

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a well expressed poem from and to a friend...

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