My Tears; Rain Poem by God is Good
My Tears; Rain
Theres a dark cloud heading our way....
The roar of the thunder scares everyone away...
The flash of lightning makes everyone scream...
Theres a thunderstorm... that's what it seems..
But no one believes looks are decieving..
And no one realizes that I am missing.
Standing in an abandoned field.....
with a young one over my shoulder....
his body now limp, his face now, only bolder....
I lay him on the ground, and stare into his face.
Now, turning ever so peaceful...
Oh my such a disgrace...
Who said that death could ever be so pleasing..
I can't help but shiver, when I see his soul releasing...
To my surprise it stops in front of me...
touching my lips gently,
before leaping into my body...
I awake hours later, and stand up feeling altered...
Now feeling new... not knowing what has occured...
Seeing the dead body, makes me feel dizzy....
and something inside me made me feel uneasy.
The sky had cleared up..
the ground now damp with rain..
But as my eyes fill up...
The storm comes now, again....
Only when the rain falls....
is when my tears are free....
I look up to the sky...
and the clouds will cry for me.
you did not write like a 13 year old.. you are good! you first know, shoudl it be no?
Wow are you sure you're 13 really great poem I mean really really great poem. We sometimes feel the clouds fill up over us and then burst as a result of a not so good bladder. It hurts to be constantly drench in cold rain when we're already sick but that's life. I find myself always being rained on. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !
you don't write like youre young in age... but who says age has anything to with it? your good.....keep writing... thanks for sharing...
It's too great poem if you're still 13 You touched me by your poem keep on your great work
this poem is amazing! ! ! ! i love how u write with ur thoughts and feelings controlling your pen! ! ! !
I look up in the sky, And the clouds will cry for me....... Such powerful words... MMI
I see... you are not the lady of doom but a lady of sadness is all and i know you will turn into the lady of joy very soon (smile) i will pray very much for that to happen. I have had tragedy in my life as well... but gladly God has helped me through it all!
really good well done. please can you have a look at some of my poems sometime please. well done
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 8:04:26 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The stealing of souls? Nature itself crying because of your triumph? I never even imagined that such a dark scene could be so... well... breathtaking