Poem And Haiku Poem by Kishore Kumar Das

Poem And Haiku

Rating: 5.0


A poem circumscribes:
Lonely emotions
Hidden feelings
Untold sufferings
Romantic vibrations
Silent determinations
Intelligent observations
Positive expressions
Current sensations
Mental hallucinations
Rainbow dreams
Endless combinations.......
It need not be an haiku!
Does it really matter?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nowadays there is craze for composing 'haiku'.... but it is not that relevant so far as the role of poetry is concerned.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 24 May 2016

Because Haiku consists of three lines is because people pen it down. But it really doesn't have any depth I feel..it have a temporary beauty...Poetry is the feeling from heart... You are so true Sir.. Nice said.

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Thank you Randhir for supporting my stand...

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Bharati Nayak 19 May 2016

It really does not matter whether a poem strictly confirms to a rule of poetry if it touches the heart of the reader and give expression to our innermost feelings.But when we sit to hone our skill towards writing a particular form of poetry we should obey the principles and format and that would surely develop our poetic expression.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2016

Hidden feelings are wonderfully expressed automatically in lonely state of mind in a poem. Positive expressions sprinkle of colours of rain bow to every direction. This is very interesting poem shared on really.10

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thank you for liking my anatomy of a poem......

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 May 2016

A poem circumscribes: Lonely emotions Hidden feelings Untold sufferings Romantic vibrations Silent determinations Intelligent observations Positive expressions Current sensations Mental hallucinations Rainbow dreams Endless combinations....... It need not be an haiku! Does it really matter? Thanks for focusing on the current trend that might one day give a false motion that poems are long and boring forms. I hate some of the Haiku's that demand heavy intellect to conceive the idea underneath. I love poetry for my heart, not for the head. Thanks poet for the poetic warmth in the poem. So 10 for it. Yours Subhas

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My dear friend Subhas...thank you for supporting my cause for poems...there is no substitute for poetry...not even prose...

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