Poem 2 Poem by azadeh salehian

Poem 2

Rating: 1.8


'World go to be domesticated
And scamper around the existence
World go to be domesticated
He's slowly go to graze
similar as person when sleeping
And see a dream
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I am heckle he's mane.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
tnx for read and plz help me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 21 November 2012

Somewhat dark poem but I like it

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Amir Forougi 03 December 2012

Deconstruction...Smell of post modern tragedies...nice

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Mousa Mohammadnia 02 December 2012

I hope to read more of you poet! I like your poem's last line. if your mean is comb...

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2012

The moving lines with great words and meanings really a well done job...but i hope you will rename all your poems instead of poem 1, poem 2...as it needs name to be remembered_SOul

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Nader Baheri 22 November 2012

wonderful subject.brilliant idea.already agree with this marvelous piece of art.with nice prose and flowing lines. best wishes~nb

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Xelam Kan™ 21 November 2012

stunned..... allusion on heckle n mane is fantastic apparently seems light but is grave in nature a much mature Art hard to rephrase for our shallow wit better add some lines in poet note:

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