Brian Young


Poem #2 - Poem by Brian Young

out side
is a silence;
the Sea
Will ever surveil;
for me
a life is a Sky

stuck in the dream machine;
sweet soft mothers ethereal veneer,
our consciousness will never disappear


Comments about Poem #2 by Brian Young

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/16/2013 10:43:00 PM)

    outside is silence, fine verse, thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (5/16/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    nice poem, well well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, May 17, 2013


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