Pied Piper Poem by persian khushi

Pied Piper



His voice
Soft and gentle
Like an early morning breeze
Leading her to her doom
Her heart's walls
Lined with tiny cracks
Waiting for the final blow
Unexpected
Shattered
Shards and splinters falling all around

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Harindhar Reddy 28 September 2012

Her heart's walls Lined with tiny cracks Waiting for the final blow, thud, thud, blows are dead, Hope yr mousy enters into yr life, open your heart doors, He will lead you to happiness, walking hand in hand, Khushi, Khushi, a soul cried after reading this... it's impressive work! (this is second version lol, first due to Technical probs...)

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Harindhar Reddy 28 September 2012

Her heart's walls Lined with tiny cracks Waiting for the final blow Thud, Thud, Blows are dead. Hope a your mousy enters your life, in a magical moment, open the doors of heart, Khushi, Kushi, . one Heart is torn in to pieces when i read this (Even, I don't understand the story behind this. Thank you.

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

The Pied Piper of Hamlin, Germany was also betrayed after drowning rats.He was unpaid and he sought revenge in the folktale.Shards and splinters have dual consequences-marriage with a happy ending or enmity showing its real guerilla face.

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