Ph: Poetry Writing: Tiny Ships In A Bottle (And Variations) Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Poetry Writing: Tiny Ships In A Bottle (And Variations)

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Tiny ships made of flotsam, most remnants of me
I tearfully warp and then carve into poems,
Just words my heart link, dreaming soul is transparent,
That I tenderly launch once again on the sea,
Each bottle containing life's florid amalgams,
To some perhaps nothing, but my heirs apparent.

Tiny ships that have beauty, just life with no con,
Their cargo perfumed by a morning's departure,
A seafaring breeze that helps ships leave safe harbor,
Show a trace of their journeys to hither or yon,
The dream of a target like draw of an archer,
Like roses exploring the height of an arbor.

All these ships, bottled soul, that I cast on the brine,
May sea salt, perhaps, preserve past poet's promise
And tempt other poets to sail past their knowing,
Truly follow their muses, no limits enshrine,
And share God's creation, shake doubting like Thomas,
Our verses, His echo, all blessings bestowing.

Brian Johnston
October 16,2016

Haiku like variation...

flotsam constructed
tiny ships in a bottle
float on balmy sea

Monday, October 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: blessing,poetry,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 17 October 2016

favorite lines: A seafaring breeze that helps ships leave safe harbor, Show a trace of their journeys to hither or yon, and May sea salt, perhaps, preserve past poet's promise .........nice alliteration! And tempt other poets to sail past their knowing, Truly follow their muses, no limits enshrine, ..............right on! NO limits! from one old salt to another: Thanks for sharing, Brian. this shall soon show up near the top end of Section A in October's 'a showcase for PH poets'. i like the rhyme scheme, but it was not very obvious to me bri :) p.s. recently i've often not found the submit button on a poem's page. but, EUREKA! , i discovered that if i copy the comment and go to send (to the poet) message AND then go back to the poem's page (without sending the 'message') i THEN FIND the elusive submit button where it belonged! this happened with this comment.

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