Perseverance (Tanks 12) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Perseverance (Tanks 12)

Rating: 5.0


Tanka 12

A leaf quivers in
a silken gossamer
The breeze breaks it loose
Spider spins the web again
To catch yet another prey.

Tuesday, August 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,perseverance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2022

A brilliant poem... much appreciated. Top score.

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Savita Tyagi 07 June 2022

Thank you Dr. swain! Appreciate your comment and your likes for many other poems.

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Sarah Mkhonza 12 November 2017

Wisdom of nature observed by a wise artist has to be good. Real perseverence. I lack it. So clear from your poem. Thanks.

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Savita Tyagi 12 November 2017

Thank you so much for reading. Appreciate the comment very much.

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Savita Tyagi 12 November 2017

Thank you so much for reading. Appreciate the comment it very much.

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