Perfect Storm Poem by Sandra Fowler

Perfect Storm

Rating: 5.0


I had you at the height of your poem.
Green thundered in the silence of itself.
I think our moment had its perfect storm,
Though it existed in a shadow tune.

A feeling older than Methuselah
Brings back your Slavic mood with every spring.
I treasure April as I would a Psalm.
Distance, my friend, is rare and ripe for praise.

Previously published, 'The World Poets Quarterly', China

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Grace 31 March 2008

In this poem the line: 'I treasure April as I would a Psalm' is for me the electric line and moment. It is always good to know it is not only Jesus who finds the Psalms foundational. Bill Grace

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John Tiong Chunghoo 02 April 2008

i really love this poem sandra. there is always so much to look forward in your poem. every verse intrigues.. and leads on. thanks for this.

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Leonard Daranjo 21 March 2008

Though every line is a gem, I love the last line: 'Distance, my friend, is rare and ripe for praise.' In addition to the sense of the nostalgia the poem evokes, this line speaks volumes. Warm regards and take care...

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 21 March 2008

The poem thundered into the hearts of mine.Eight lines with a seer vision captures the vivid aspects of emotions idealising the reality.Excellent work....

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Duncan Wyllie 21 March 2008

This has a dream-like quality about it, something so youthful and new I love it Thankyou for sharing it Sandra Love duncan X

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2022

A highly expressive poem dear Sandra. Loved it

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Mamta Agarwal 06 September 2009

I treasure April as I would a psalm- this one line says all that you felt for your friend Sandra. you say it with such reverence, and the beauty is that you call the poem Perfect Storm. how peace and quiet descends after a storm has blown away... April in your part of the world heralds spring, such contrasting images all in eight lines as always a pleasure to read Affectionate Regards Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 09 June 2008

these emotion rich eight lines show how treasure like you value a friend a poem and memories you like, sandra! *10*

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Abha Sharma 07 May 2008

a beautiful imagery put in the context of nature and emotion... I think our moment had its perfect storm, Though it existed in a shadow tune. .................................................an impressive metaphor to reveal the feelings **Abha**

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Original Unknown Girl 28 April 2008

Stunning! I love storms and I love this poem. Agree with W Grace, that line in particular stood out for me... HG: -) xx

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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