Pen Poem by Pablo Cruise

Pen

Rating: 4.8


I pen to summon upon my soul
To flush the colors to the skin
The dye of composition twists
Until the conscience rings spent within

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 29 April 2009

Ok..upon your soul, you pen....colouring the skin...the dying of the skin, the conscience gets twisted to alarm...may be a tatoo you mean? ..a twisting poem

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

May be penning a beautiful poem.........summons our soul to come fore.........and may be our skin is flush with colours of soul.................vow............this is what i understand.............may be i am wrong...........good write.......10+++.......

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Eyan Desir 11 March 2009

yeah to short but sweet lines

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Malini Kadir 22 March 2008

four lines that says it all...wonderful!

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