Parting Ways Poem by elena winters

Parting Ways

Rating: 5.0


I'm sorry things didn't work out between us
I wish things could've been diffrent
maybe if you weren't so bossy
always trying to control my life


thinking you could tell me what to do and when to do it
thinking you can tell me what i can and cannot do
thinking you have the right to choose my friends

OH HELL NO!

you don't own me
I am my own person
I make my own decisions

you don't see me snooping through your wallet looking for another females number

nor do you see me going through your cell phone checking your text messages when your asleep

why...........because i'm faithful, truthful, and respectful

If only you weren't so blind to see it
our life together would've been diffrent

so as of now i'm turning over a new leaf
for someone who will appreciate me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 27 November 2008

Yeah, I agree with your poem there. :) Nice write! :)

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C. P. Sharma 25 November 2008

hi breeze, Even the river that flows Has to bear hard surface blows, But gradually singing its sweet song Twists and turns, finally makes its way It never leaves the touch with the ground to fly away. CP

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C T Heart 25 November 2008

Better to build your own castle and gain worthy for yourself, but leaving someone to have one is not the answer...time will come Mr. Right will find you...never rush. Thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 November 2008

Oh dear don't turn your back on true love otherwise.............if you think its right to do so.Nice works Breeze.

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James Mclain 25 November 2008

nice way to look at things.....

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