Secret Admire Poem by elena winters

Secret Admire

Rating: 5.0


i see you
you see me

you turn away
i turn away

you are silent
i am silent

you say one word
i say nothin

did you give up
because i didn't

i want you
do you want me?

maybe i'm wrong
maybe i never crossed your mind

it doesn; t matter cause i'll always like you
in mind

no one will know
my little secret

until i see you when i'm grown

maybe i'll tell you.........maybe I won't

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evaughn Gray 13 November 2008

it's cute, it's soft and sweet maybe even a little hint of pleading.. but it was a wonderful poem non the less! ~Hazel G.E

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C T Heart 12 November 2008

a beautiful write of your feelings...so expressive...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 November 2008

Oh what a feeling! .The untold would be reveal soon after your ready! ! Nice piece Breeze.Keep writing.

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Emily Oldham 06 November 2008

great poem................ i love it........ Athena *** words will change the world ***

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