Parting Poem by pauliski pauliski

Parting

Rating: 4.1


When the gaps begin to show
and dialogue ceases to flow.
It can only be presumed
that breakdown in communication
is imminent.
Argument bedecks the stage
and quickly turns to rage.
Understanding can be lost
Warmth then turns to frost.
Where once we went to plays
We go our separate ways.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I've been to that exact place and I wouldn't swap it for the world because I learned all the lessons. You captured the essence very well and made me think back. Ez

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Kee Thampi 17 October 2006

It can only be presumed that breakdown in communication is imminent. Argument bedecks the stage and quickly turns to rage. Understanding can be lost Warmth start of a great war and makes a great rage of terror in our inner life

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Michael Emine 12 July 2006

a sad piece never hold a grudge darling

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