Paris, Please Accept Me, As A Human Refugee Poem by ahmed khaled

love it... you write with passion!

i'm more touched by the refugee predicament reflected in the poem...the emotion determines the style in this case quite secondary!

I love this write, 'tis an excellent poem! ! ! Oh, refugee birds Make a nest On top of My peepul tree As I'm a tree A Refugee tree With no companion In my branches Or nor have I a root of pedigree

o paris................ Y paris................ the patience, eating the happiness the pain, eating the patience and the pain, eating the pain I AM SICK, paris treat me, sister paris................ o paris................ Y paris................ exile, on my papers restrained, ..

great write, I enjoyed reading it very much...smiles n blessings

So beautiful in places, I am caught in colour.

There is so much pain where you live Ahmed, peace is so illusive and I feel so sad for those caught in the crossfire.

'Tis a wonderful poem! ! ! I like this one: : Oh, all refugee birds Make your nests On the top of My peepul tree As I'm alone In this land With no cmpanioin On my branches and nor have I here a root of pedigree My leaves are silent They lost their murmur Strech your wings Under its shadow So my soul will awake By the fllutter of your words! ! ! !