ahmed khaled


Paris, Please Accept Me, As A Human Refugee


paris................
o paris................
Y paris................
the patience, eating the happiness
the pain, eating the patience
and the pain, eating the pain
I AM SICK, paris
treat me, sister
paris................
o paris................
Y paris................
exile, on my papers
restrained, ..
in my lines
so free me, paris
treat me, paris
I BELONG TO YOU, ..
sister
my home, the colours of MONET
my room, is a water flower
my air..
is the scent of FRANCE
and my refuge..
is a place by RENOIR shrine
so take me paris..
as your..
renoirian..
REFUGEE.

Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, December 27, 2011

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  • Rookie Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 11:26:00 AM)

    o paris................
    Y paris................
    the patience, eating the happiness
    the pain, eating the patience
    and the pain, eating the pain
    I AM SICK, paris
    treat me, sister
    paris................
    o paris................
    Y paris................
    exile, on my papers
    restrained, .. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (1/6/2012 2:56:00 PM)

    great write, I enjoyed reading it very much...smiles n blessings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elizabeth Wesley (12/30/2011 9:32:00 PM)

    There is so much pain where you live Ahmed, peace is so illusive and I feel so sad for those caught in the crossfire. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/30/2011 5:31:00 AM)

    'Tis a wonderful poem! ! !
    I like this one: :
    Oh, all refugee birds
    Make your nests
    On the top of
    My peepul tree
    As I'm alone
    In this land
    With no cmpanioin
    On my branches
    and nor have I
    here a root of pedigree
    My leaves are silent
    They lost their murmur
    Strech your wings
    Under its shadow
    So my soul will awake
    By the fllutter of your words! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/30/2011 5:19:00 AM)

    I love this write,
    'tis an excellent poem! ! !
    Oh, refugee birds
    Make a nest
    On top of
    My peepul tree
    As I'm a tree
    A Refugee tree
    With no companion
    In my branches
    Or nor have I
    a root of pedigree (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (12/28/2011 11:42:00 PM)

    i'm more touched by the refugee predicament reflected in the poem...the emotion determines the style in this case quite secondary! (Report) Reply

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