ahmed khaled

great write, I enjoyed reading it very much...smiles n blessings

So beautiful in places, I am caught in colour.

There is so much pain where you live Ahmed, peace is so illusive and I feel so sad for those caught in the crossfire.

'Tis a wonderful poem! ! !
I like this one: :
Oh, all refugee birds
Make your nests
On the top of
My peepul tree
As I'm alone
In this land
With no cmpanioin
On my branches
and nor have I
here a root of pedigree
My leaves are silent
They lost their murmur
Strech your wings
Under its shadow
So my soul will awake
By the fllutter of your words! ! ! !

I love this write,
'tis an excellent poem! ! !
Oh, refugee birds
Make a nest
On top of
My peepul tree
As I'm a tree
A Refugee tree
With no companion
In my branches
Or nor have I
a root of pedigree

i'm more touched by the refugee predicament reflected in the poem...the emotion determines the style in this case quite secondary!

love it... you write with passion!