Paradise Blessed Poem by Ernestine Northover

Paradise Blessed

Rating: 5.0


Rippling blue, sky's reflection,
Sea and river, winds direction.
Water lapping, briskly flowing,
Twinkling facets, motion growing.
Sunshine glinting, sparkling array,
Shining sunbeams, jewelled ballet.

Waves disturbing, turning grey,
Lightning flashes, sparks ricochet.
Gloom descending, thunder cracks,
Whipping twister, storm attacks.
Lashing downpour, terror felt,
Endless tumult, hailstones pelt.

Calmness gathers, squall complies,
Raindrops ceasing, uproar dies.
Gentle breezes, warming air,
Peaceful nature, silence rare.
Azure welkin, zephyr caressed,
Abundant freshness, paradise blessed.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 26 March 2009

Another great work Ernestine, you describe the coming and passing of a storm so well, wonderful! Love, Andrew xx

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Jeannie Ann Clark 17 June 2008

Beautiful words chosen in this descriptive writing...You write well. Thank you. Jeannie.

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R H 16 April 2007

This is wonderful Ernestine - superb contrasts of the calm before and after the storm - extremely visual with lovely unforced rhymes. Love it. Justine

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Duncan Wyllie 16 April 2007

I love the way you styled this one Ernestine, like the before/during and after of a storm coming to rest in the silence of solitude, beautiful reaful feel to it Take care Love duncan X

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Jim Foulk 16 April 2007

a great piece of wonderful poetry, flowed real well Ernestine

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