Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.
I wish to cradle this feeling,
that has only just been found,
A feeling that has unexpectedly
turned my world around.
Do not depart, Oh please remain
within my heart awhile,
So that I can savour you once more,
and hold you in my smile.
Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. Nicely penned. 10++
Marvelously conceived stunning yet very simple poem. Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day.
Remain with me deep within let this smile stay. lovely poem Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile.
Beautifully written. So much expressed in so few words. You inspire me.
This poem is written wonderfully! With the ability to understand the emotion in every word!
I really love all the lines of this it very well expresses the feelings we hold for someone such as when we're young and have/meet that first love that we think is the perfect one! very well written! 👍👍
A feeling that has unexpectedly turned my world around. Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. Beautiful poem.