Paper Boats Poem by Ami Joshi
Paper Boats
As I listen,
Listen to the silence between us,
The moon shone with a smile.
The droplets in my eyes;
Make wishes,
See dreams,
As they sit for a moment on my eyelashes.
Then,
As I blinked with his brilliant view,
I hoped to make them true.
Paper Boats
@ Ami Joshi
Amazingly rendered and so dasghingly worded. a WOW poem I CITE YOU: The droplets in my eyes; Make wishes, Sheer WONDERFUL Poem, CONGRATULATIOINS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! A 10 Full Score and much much more, dear poetess. I have really enjoyed after becoming SURPRISED at all. God's Blessings be greatest! The poem is truly marvelous! Thank you for chosing, Poem Hunter and Team.
The picture you added is a dashing one! I cite few lines of your poem: The droplets in my eyes; Make wishes, See dreams, See DREAMS...WOW! A truly Dashing poem. Fantastically presented.
Hopes and Dreams! ! Love and life, Very beautiful with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A dreamy sequence beautifully aided by surreal images. May this hope turn into reality. Thanks.
As I blinked with his brilliant view, I hoped to make them true// superb and beautiful poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD
Well expressed thoughts and feeling. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.
Nice poem. Congrats on being selected as the poem of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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PAPERBOATS..........? Have I found these paperboats elsewhere? Yes.No.? It must be a DREAM, am I dreaming? I don't think so. The great philosopher and poet TAGORE Sir has sung this for me in his poem Paperboats. Mostn fascinating! Thank you Tagore Sir for sharing this poem and thank you poetess Ami for your poem.
Thanks, Ma'am Sylvia, for recalling the beautiful poem by Tagore. I have just read that poem and was mesmerised by its poetic beauty and philosophy.