Painter Poem by Asif Baloch

Painter

Rating: 4.8


painting was painted
and hanged on the wall
people are entering
the exhibition is on
everyone is watching and
have an idea of there own
the true meaning of painting
is lost and gone
the painter standing in the corner
smiling on there thoughts
with sadness in his smile
and tears once that dropped

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I'm thankful to my friend and fellow poet Ashraful Musaddeq for encouraging and helping me out in the completion of this poem....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Abdullah 23 September 2008

everyone is watching and have an idea of there own the true meaning of painting is lost and gone Great Words Well Done

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Aijaz Asif 23 September 2008

thank you sir for your kind concern...as far as i know poets have no religion they have only one religion and every poet knows which is that...sir plzz do read it again and try to understand wat poem is saying....thanks regards Asif Balouch

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

different meanings on different visions...the painting is one and the same...the 'Painter' may be musing only over the viewer's ignorance...you give up crying...10

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Koyel Mitra 23 September 2008

Lovely poem with a deep inner meaning.A painter's soul is the painting itself, the colours on the canvas.A 10!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 24 September 2008

very deep thought...for any artist the worse insult is to be misunderstood...its demeaning and heartbreaking! ...tears do indeed flow.well done

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Rifhan Rasuli 05 October 2008

It's arts, where meanings are based on the audiences. Subjectivity is unavoidable. Poor painter, if he wants the meaning to be rigid according to his own manifestation. But yes, at least the painting is appreciated.

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2008

Very touching. But at least the painting was appreciated. Excellent.A ten for your sensitivity. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anna jonson 27 September 2008

what a poem...painters are always romantic

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Anna jonson 27 September 2008

what a poem...painters are always romantic

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Egi David Perdana 26 September 2008

a painter great image one of beautiful rare poems

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