Pages Of Mind Poem by Unwritten Soul

Pages Of Mind

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1. Learned from the tree, i know we wont always stay at the bottom, because root will push us up to grow branches and be stronger, and i know we dont always be at the top, because there is always new shoot that growing upper than us. But where we are now, is where the maturity and significant of ourselves to gain, to support the whole.

2. Of past, what's left for you is you, what you still have, is whatever you remember. How it birth future? Its how you learned from it.

3. Having feathers is not reflecting a bird can fly, Having a pencil doesnt mean you can write... Having a will to learn and to improve however will change them all... From "having" to "gain". Abilities reformed!

4. Do u ever wonder, no matter what seasons fall on earth, the birds still love the trees... Either when the flowers grow, or when the summer green all, or when leaves leave in fall even during the winter call... Birds, love to sit on tree, still... How true the friendship can be...it will always be like this, through thick and thin☺

5. To see leaf, nothing special, all leaves are equally beautiful, equally important, though live scattered, stretched to find light... But all stand for the same tree that stand on the same root, but all share the best strength for the everyone benefits. If one falls, thousands wont despair the life, of a tree... Oh humanity can u see that in us?

6. Opening a new year, its just like opening of a new day, it just day have 24hours of experience while a year has more stories of 365 days. So as it opened, we have hope, yes we gained and lose... Losing and gain are difficult to understand, to accept, to be observed by a day, we need maybe a year to appreciate the whole story and things behind. And the whole life need more years or decade to figure out a better understanding, to gain more than just an event. So dont cry for todays pain...story will be completed when time finish narrating it. We will understand...perhaps not now. It could be not bad as we think before.

7. Dont just adore of something, be a part of that. Then it be yours. Eg: Dont adore of success, take part of the journey. Because it is possible if you really want it.

8. While soothing a friend because of the decision that was made, i found this to say, to both of us... Success not coming alone, it comes with stress during the journey, bear this in mind always... and satisfaction wait at the end. But the journey of success walk with stress and tests.

9. We all afraid of uncertainty, because we dont know what's next for us... It just like walking in a heavy mist or fog, we cant see thing a meter and miles ahead but if we can, just see what we can, carefully we walk...we will reach there safely. Looking at the fogs forgets us about what we may missed nearby, careful... hole maybe one step ahead. Dont think too far, observe "scenery" around while planning ahead.

10. No matter how successful a person can be, what make life is a worthliving is to have happiness, contentment and thankfulness. If someone is showered with fame or luxury or recognized with achievements but dont have these, life is still lacking something. As you can have all that you want, these three are not guaranteed in human hands. Its not living just with what we "want" but live with what we "need".

11. We may not have much influence to rule the world to be a better place, its fine. We can change ourselves, because we can...and we change environment to people around us by preserving kindness and care, the responds may not totally rewarding but create larger kindness halo as our reply, as a community affects other community... And communities build the nation.

12. Sometimes we forget, the sand that keeps tree standing strong...we only look at how big the trees are, and fruits they have. Considering that we should never forget anybody that works hard, including labour and anyone even to the road cleaners, looking at their faces and hardwork... They deserve a huge thanks and appreciation, because every little thing is cared for us so we can focus on other big things.

13. Discussing with friends, about a situation and i still believe my opinion i gave even at this moment, I believe that we should not too calculative to help others, no matter if we dont get any profit out of it, or shouldnt feel bad if they get rewarded for things they do with our help. Instead we should feel good to see there is a meaning in our life to make people get well, thats a reward for us to feel fulfillment to use our abilities. The successes are theirs but a support from us make us confident about value in self, to contribute in someones living. Our abilities are not to be proud if it useless to others, instead it should be a complement to others lackness, vice versa.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some collection of my pondering, thoughts before 2019 ended. Here i keep my thought alive and to be shared..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 02 January 2020

A great work, Soul. There is something about a new year and renewal. There is almost a predictable pattern to what defines life. At the same time, all experience is unique. As they say, history doe not so much repeat as it rhymes. A perfect poem for the start of a new cycle.

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Bharati Nayak 03 January 2020

Wow- -Such great and beautiful thoughts- -giving inspiration. Let me quote two of them- - Having feathers is not reflecting a bird can fly, Having a pencil doesnt mean you can write... Having a will to learn and to improve however will change them all... From " having" to " gain" . Abilities reformed!

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Bharati Nayak 03 January 2020

Sometimes we forget, the sand that keeps tree standing strong...we only look at how big the trees are, and fruits they have. Considering that we should never forget anybody that works hard, including labour and anyone even to the road cleaners, looking at their faces and hardwork... They deserve a huge thanks and appreciation, because every little thing is cared for us so we can focus on other big things- - I really love your beautiful thoughts

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Denis Mair 10 January 2020

All these ponderings remind me of the leaves in Paragraph 5. The leaves are falling at every moment, butut each of them contributes by gathering light that the whole tree can use, so it can be useful to others. I like what you say about needing to place each experience in the context of a whole day or lifetime in order to know it's true meaning.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 January 2020

VERY EDUCATIVE PROSAIC KINDA POETRY MANY LOVED IT I DID TOO READ SOME OF MINE WILL YOU FROM A SEED NOW TO 433/500 I GREW ALL BECAUSE OF SUPPORT OF POETS LIKE YOU

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2020

A poem of great depth. Wonderful thoughts imbued with wisdom and insight. The opening stanza is like a poem by itself. Beautiful lines that are so true and must be kept in our hearts and imbibe in our minds. The other stanzas provide wonderful thoughts to live by. A very inspiring poem beautifully crafted.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 January 2020

Every mind is a book in that a page is added every day, who knows when this book will be complete.

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Muhammad Ali 04 January 2020

Your work is amazing. Each thought is best. Your process of thinking and communication is very nice. Unity, enjoying the presence, journey is better than to stay regretting, friendship, humanity, many more messages and most important is to keep learning. And there a difference between want and need. I enjoyed. I enjoyed more where WE is used. It conveyed passively. Brilliant

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