Orison (Give Me Your Smile) Poem by Unwritten Soul
Orison (Give Me Your Smile)
Waves meet the end
When the ocean reach the land
Water the sand, before your feet
Two worlds meet
The future is far way, at the end of the world
In the horizon still our wonder
High mountain we climbed
Seek for this secret, far sighted distance
Nothing...Do you see the end? ...Nothing
We can't see the ending of everything
Now we learned, future is unpredictable
Not yet to cherish
Not yet to cry
Look back the past
Broken dreams pull your tears
Don't cry my dear soon it will over
All we got not will always be good
Because, It's not heaven we live on
Always have true hopes, never get down
So smile for a little, keep hopes alive
Chase on the light
In depth of the dark
Could be faint but still bright
Bright and brighter when it's dark and darker
Remember
The past has gone
The future still untold
We need the light to move on
Stay in sadness or seek for happiness
Shed you tears, don't cry my dear
Paradise is not where we living now
To promise you will happy forever
Just give your smile to me
I'll lend my hand for you
We will cross the ocean,
Chase the basement of the rainbow
Till we reach the horizon
The end of the world
If we are the ships, lost in the ocean
All we need, a direction
You as a captain with options
Decide your choice
To sink in the middle or
To harbor your dream
Remember
Far in the ocean
As the waves will meet the end
As it wash the sand
Soon we will find a land
Back home and safe from the stormy seas..
The hope always exist for whom believe it
The dark is forever if we deny the present of the light
-ORISON is the Introduction of my upcoming poems, collectively
known as 'Rise from The Ashes (RFTA) '..and the theme is about to be free.
I try to bring some dark more, but in positive..
it wont be sad as it still come from my hand, Unwritten Soul hahahahaha
Inspired by people, I not promise the collection of RFTA will be good or perfect write coz i am not good writer, i just can offer what i can give, my thought and support..Sorry it this introduction still have some weak somewhere, just write it right now...: P
1st poem from RFTA: End of Time
As someone said in his comment: you are a bright soul in a dark shadow you're so bright continue to share more poems: °)
this is a great write with soul and hope for the live we wish to have, the heart comes through really strongly keep it up please as you can write good poems
So lovely, as always. You've never disappointed me with your work. I'm sure RFTA will be a spectacular project. I look forward to seeing more of it.
Past has gone, future is untold, hence present is better than those. We must have smiles instead of sadness. We must hope for better future. Perfect works of present will lead us to bright future. Fantastic expression has been made on time and life journey. I quote....... The past has gone The future still untold ......... .......... .......... ............ ......... ..... The hope always exist for whom believe it The dark is forever if we deny the present of the light Nice work.
A lovely and compelling piece, Soul- with the alluring promise of more. We look forward to those works!
Wow! man! this is a masterpiece, , its a very fine piece of art, a beautiful painting indeed.it got everything Soul...there's an artist, i am not sure who it was between HENRY MATISE and VAN GHORGH, who painted that painting called THE WINDOW...looking at the pic you can just say jah, he just painted what you can outside the window, but the meaning is deep, beyond the trees and flowers you see on the pic, , 'the past has gone, the future still untold we need the light to move on'
Yup! Past is past, future is uncertain or certainly unpredictable. So we are left with single choice live in the present world. It is upto us whether we glorify or life or cut a sorry face 24/7. 'The past has gone The future still untold We need the light to move on Stay in sadness or seek for happiness' As matter of fact, It was my privilege to read these lines which have behemoth effect on my life that is me in every life. A UNIVERSAL THEME runs all the poems. Good narrative technique employed by the poetess. Lo! Unwritten Soul A big thumbs up to you!
As a matter of fact, a true and pure sense of humanity and solidarity refinement...nice work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I love this lil bro..i will always have a smilw for you as you are a bright soul in a dark shadow...always brightening my day..and u r an extremely skillful and enjoyable writer. Big sis xo