Owl Poem by Daniel Brick

Owl

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Moon-hunter, soft-feathered flyer!
Your night spell calls me
into its cool radiance.

Shadow-bird, doom-carrier of our ancestors!
Your heart-shaped face blesses
the simple expedient of crossing paths.

Night-singer, winged dancer of spring!
I hear in your unchanging voice
a time-trapped music I too can sing.

Friday, May 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: natural
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem to celebrate - and remember - an unusual encounter with an owl. First the setting. The Mississippi River, rolling majestically between very high banks, divides the Twin Cities of St. Paul and Minneapolis. There is a parkway that runs on both sides with big, expensive estates on one side of the street and a wide walkway bordering the high banks on the other. I am describing the St. Paul side; the Minneapolis side is slightly different. I am surprised more don't walk along this parkway during the daytime and evening, but people prefer to walk around the many lake fronts in the cities.

One evening, a good number of years ago, a friend and I started on the Minneapolis side, near Minnehaha Park heading toward the University of Minnesota campus. This walkway is not wilderness by any means. It's all residential, but there are no commercial buildings to clutter the scene. Just after I locked my car, I felt something brush my cheek; a few seconds later, my friend said something had brushed the top of his head. We became aware suddenly of an owl's hooting, soft but insistent. It flew from the tree just over our heads in a swooping motion, and disappeared in the gathering twilight. But a few seconds later, repeated the same movements from the other direction. This pattern continued during our whole 40+ minute walk. The owl would wait for us in a tree, always visible, never hiding, make his swooping flight just above one of our heads, disappear, make the return flight, seek shelter in a tree ahead of us. All the while, we heard its distinctive hootings. If that owl had wanted to slash one of us on his swooping flights, it could have easily done so. We did nothing to protect ourselves, but it never threatened us. We crossed paths with a wild thing, and it played with us for almost an hour. But 'PLAY' is a weak word. I believe, and my friend even more strongly, we were blessed by a creature, 'one of the lords of life',
in D.H.Lawrence's wonderful phrase. This encounter occurred many years ago, but it remains fresh and strong in my memory, my friend's and we suspect the owl's!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Y. 20 June 2014

Really beautiful description here. Reminds me of my research that went into BIRDHOUSE. Owls specifically are one of the most magnificent birds. If an owl could speak, what do you think it would tell you?

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Valsa George 05 August 2014

A poet finds beauty in this fearsome nocturnal bird too. Reading the notes, I felt that the bird's circling around and darting up and down could have been a terrifying experience, if you had believed in what the ancestors associated with the bird! Enjoyed all the epithets used on this bird, especially 'the doom- carrier of our ancestors'! Here in our part of the country the owl is still looked upon as bird of ill omen! To be frank, I feel a tinge of fear when I hear the hooting of an owl which is 'time trapped music' to you! Enjoyed!

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Bharati Nayak 15 October 2018

Moon-hunter, soft-feathered flyer! Your night spell calls me into its cool radiance. Shadow-bird, doom-carrier of our ancestors! Your heart-shaped face blesses the simple expedient of crossing paths.- - - - - - - Your poem can do wonders in changing our perception for this noctunal bird; we generally consider its whooting a bad omen.

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Thank you for introducing the Owl to us in such a vivid and beautiful way. You are a gifted writer!

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Cigeng Zhang 26 February 2016

A lovely poem for little Owl. People say, as wise as owl. I also love this bird species. Enjoyed reading.

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Shahin Latif 01 December 2015

Excellent Experience. Good job! Heartiest thanks to you. Be happy always.

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2015

Never was the Owl better portrayed. A poem to be remembered and loved! ....Moon hunter, soft -feathered flyer! .... From beginning to end, excellent.

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