Our Love Poem by justin harrington

Our Love



my heart is fading away
like the sun at 6pm
like a wilting flower
when cut at the stem

i know you already know this
but im truley in love with you
laying down looking at the stars
and knowing our love is true

holding your hand firmly and close
knowing your by my side
though life's hard troubles
i know you won't hide

i hope we can be togeather forever
i will never let you go
though this painfull life
our love will grow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 25 April 2007

my heart is fading away like the sun at 6pm like a wilting flower when cut at the stem I like this simile very much-the setting sun and the wilting flower. A presentation of poetic excellence.

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