Our 25th Valentines Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Our 25th Valentines

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Time flashes so fast
Life itself does not last
Yet count not the days
Nor the hours or ways!
For we are still together
Much love for each other

Though I made you cry
In times when days dry
Yet deep inside my heart
It breaks to see you hurt!
For we are still together
Much love for each other

Valentines Day is here again
Celebration with love to gain
My belove please do not fear
My love for you can never wear!
For we are still bonding together
Much bonding love for each other

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 13 February 2008

A wonderful write, and i know you two will cling to each other for better or for worse.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 February 2008

quite amazing, both when walk hand in hand across the journey of life.wish all the best

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Paul Butters 18 April 2008

I like the wider context included in this deeply felt love poem. Well written. Paul.

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Res John Burman 24 March 2008

Lovely poem Marvin, I love to hear of love that lasts, certainly cause for celebration. Regards ~ Res

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Raveendran . 05 March 2008

The speaker addresses his lady in the language of love, their relationship (carpe diem) , in essence, defies death by a firm belief in living in the present.

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BEAU GOLDEN 15 February 2008

Very artistic Marvin, i enjoyed reading this! beau

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 February 2008

so beautiful, thanks for sharing

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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