Opportunity Looms.... Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Opportunity Looms....

Rating: 5.0


O overriding the pride, mind held
P phantom, appears from nowhere
P psycho being shattered in to pieces
O opportunely, soul remains calm
R resilient mind opts to wait, watchfully
T till its dead right to act, critically at the
U unwelcomed moment for the foe
N no yielding, mind agrees sensibly to
I invest on patience, for precious life
T thoughtfully and gainfully, wagering on
Y yielding triumph for a lifetime, at the end

Opportunity Looms....
Tuesday, July 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: challenges,life,optimism,patience
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

Phantom appears from pride and this captures mind like phantom does. But soul remains calm and judges upon every action carefully. Thoughtfully and gainfully new product is yield from opportunity. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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