Ophelia Poem by Joyce Chelmo

Ophelia

Rating: 4.8


bathing stress away
the phone rings
i plug my nose
sink slowly
beneath
tepid water
into silence
i pretend
i’m Ophelia
dead to the world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hugh Cobb 05 May 2006

Good write, Red. Tight, compact and with a touch of humor and some practical advice. I've done the same but never pretended to be 'the poor drowned wretch! ' Best, Hugh

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***** ********* 05 May 2006

OMG Joyce! I was doing exactly that only yesterday. Just like your poem describes, I hadn't realised how being submerged completely blocks out all sound. It is a very peaceful place to be indeed. I hadn't tried it since being a child, well a much younger one! lol Thanks for this. 10 from smiling, a little more relaxed today! Tai

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Peter A. Crowther 05 May 2006

Much the best way to deal with an inconvenient phone call :) Good write

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