Garden Of Seiryoji Poem by Joyce Chelmo

Garden Of Seiryoji

Rating: 5.0


He walks reverent
on stone paths in
the Garden of Seiryoji
where nature’s
balanced Feng Shui,
and the green
takes his breath away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 06 June 2006

A beautiful poem that exudes a sense of calm, each word carefully chosen to create this visual gem. Kind regards, Justine.

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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2006

A beautiful piece, I saw the path, now just have to try and walk it the right way A great write Love Duncan X

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Hugh Cobb 25 May 2006

Dear Red, This is just lovely. Beautifully written and tight, it is a well-crafted jewel of a poem. Best, Hugh

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Richard Terrify 24 May 2006

I have goodebumps...all over! Absolutely beautiful! My breath as been taken away as well! -Rick

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