Ongoing Time Poem by sudip niroula

Ongoing Time

Rating: 5.0


Lost loved one, stabbing pain in heart
The mountain of sorrow hits you hard
And can't be redeemed by joy of paradise.
But Flawless and baffling is time,
it goes on and so will life.

Failed after burning a candle on both side.
All hope diffused in the dark.
hide yourself, hanged life in incomplete maze,
But Flawless and baffling is time,
it goes on and so will life.

When Life falls like a leaf in autumn
And no one calls you by your name.
Isolated hated and ignored.
But Flawless and baffling is time,
it goes on and so will life.

Enjoyed beauty of nature,
Have life on the top of world
But Flawless and baffling is time,
It goes on and so will life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

But Flawless and baffling is time...WELL DONE SUDIP N

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

But Flawless and baffling is time

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

But Flawless and baffling is time A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY LINE SUDIP

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sudip. Thank you very much,

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Nidhi Agrawal 24 July 2017

Life does go on no matter what. Lovely poem

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