Love Unequited Poem by sudip niroula
Love Unequited
you came with love,
you went with hate,
you loved me so did i
i freeze and you fly.
now beyond these dark illusions
you look like a witch
you walk like lame
you freaked your shame.
now these slow rain
when strikes my pain
i walk with my shadow
that grew and fills the shallow.
pain is to be felt,
but, what about your love? ?
shall i feel or guilt,
empty promises nullifies itself.
Empty promises nullifies itself.The way you express the universal concept of pain is very awesome.Thanks for sharing.10++++
pain is to be felt, but, what about your love? ? shall i feel or guilt, empty promises nullifies itself. promises, love, young life, experiences which will last a life. all that you hve brought in here in this poem. thank you. tony
Love and hate! ! With the common pain seen around. Nice work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A great start with a nice poem on love, Sudip. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks