One Who Has Sacrificed With A Kept Pace Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

One Who Has Sacrificed With A Kept Pace



Something done persistently,
Eventually wears on the body and mind...
Of the one who has given time to find,
Without a resting to qualify this to be done...
Like some who give their recommendations,
Misunderstanding the drive it has taken...
To make sure things are set in place.
They would never understand,
One who has sacrificed with a kept pace.

Well...I do.
And it is not from that which I am doing today.
It is a much needed rest,
From that which has taken years in the making
To create.
Never before considered the connection between,
Aches and pains and the lack of rest.
Until my mind and body began to beg for some.
And getting as much as I can get to just rest,
To prioritize for myself is best.

And aging has made me more aware of this!
Without proper rest,
The body and mind begins to insist it be done.
And quick with a paying of attention.

Oh...
You don't need to shout so loud.
I hear you very clearly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Fathers are great people, who have sacrificed their life for the family, but what happen between father and mother as husband and wife is different issue. I would like to support the men, if they are responsible fathers, ..an.Interesting poem, which talks about the real need of men when they are old..

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