One Last Breath Poem by Kyrsten Gaddis

One Last Breath

Rating: 3.0


The snow that shines
Beneath the pines
Has a secret you wouldn't believe
It will enchant and delight you, But has a trick up it's sleeve
We play up in the snow all day
But trekking through takes your breath away
One little rest
Will be a test
Between life or death
But I won't let you take that one last breath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Caswell 18 May 2009

its good but the end is the best 'i wont you take that last beath', good

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Corey Rebbechi 17 May 2009

i lyk it not to shabby

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Fearless D 17 May 2009

I like it, but I prefer poems that flow.

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