Once Upon A Time ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Once Upon A Time ~

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time, in a deep valley,
There lived a young shepherd with a flat belly.

He roamed the fields, tending his flock,
With a gleam in his eye, a secret he'd lock.

For this shepherd, you see, had a great passion,
To create a device that would aid his sheep's ration.

He dreamed of a contraption to guide his flock,
To the lushest pastures, while he took a sweet restock.

With gears and pulleys, he labored day and night,
Inventing and tinkering, he wouldn't lose sight.

He toiled in his workshop, with a feverish skill,
Crafting a masterpiece, he called it 'Sheep-queen.'

Now, the Sheep-queen was a marvelous sight,
With wheels and wings, it shone so bright.

But the problem arose when the sheep caught a glance,
They ran in terror, as if in a trance.

The shepherd watched, with a disappointed sigh,
His grand invention scattered the sheep, oh my!

He tried coaxing and chasing, he even played tunes,
But the sheep found his Sheep-queen ridiculously jejune.

His dreams of invention were completely in vain,
As the sheep made a dash for the steepest terrain.

So, the shepherd accepted a life that was mundane,
No more inventing, no grand scheme to attain.

But as fate would have it, a twist came about,
When a sheep named Bessie began to shout.

She said, 'Oh, dear shepherd, why can't we explore?
Discover greener pastures than ever before? '

The shepherd was puzzled, but an idea sparked bright,
He had been looking too far, when the answer was 'right.'

He took off his thinking cap, put on his walking shoes,
And ventured with Bessie, under the sky's hues.

Together they found meadows, so divine,
Where sheep could indulge, with plenty to dine.

And so, the young shepherd learned a valuable lesson,
Sometimes the simplest plans, bring the greatest expression.

His Sheep-queen abandoned, a lesson was clear,
To follow the sheep, not chase dreams austere.

Driven like the sheep, he learned with a grin,
That sometimes life's humor is found in a trial.

Thursday, September 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: fairy tale,imagination,nonsense,humorous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 28 September 2023

Nice story. Nice narration. Liked

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Anjandev Roy 28 September 2023

This is an excellent work....thank u...my friend..

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Kingsley Egbukole 28 September 2023

Sometimes we just have to stop doing things on our own and ask those we are serving what they really want. A moral lesson

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 September 2023

Truly powerful TFs Asim Wonderful

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Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2023

Awesome! .. A wonderfully wise tale! ..

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Kim Barney 31 October 2023

Sometimes the unexpected happens an an invention is successful.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2023

Top marks for this valuable lesson and to my favourite too.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2023

Beautiful story with a moral not just for the shepherd but for us too. Thank you dear Asim ji.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2023

I loved this story of the sheperd and his sheep. In life, we try to chase big dreams but realise that we just have to flow with life like a natural stream to find joy.

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Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2023

Excellently expressed and so beautifully told! .. Loved it! .. Endless 10'S and Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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