On The Whitewashed Wall Poem by nimal dunuhinga

On The Whitewashed Wall

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A train of black Ants like a pilgrimage,
While they are going never miss to talk each other.
Where are they going?
It's a puzzle for me.
Soon they vanished and I touched the wall,
I felt the vibration of their footsteps.
I am sure they found another World beyond the wall.
I sit and scribble in between the walls
But I cannot see the outside unless I break the wall.

*Oh! Who made this barrier? I thought it's ordinary bricks but much stronger than mud!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 18 April 2009

Your image of ants on a whitewashed wall is original and compelling. This poem poses questions for which there seem to be no answers - but like all good philosophical debates, the questions are what matters in the long run. Brilliant word-smithing. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 15 April 2009

Life has many barriers, but poetry transcends them all. As usual, your rapport with nature resonates. Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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