On Her Course Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

On Her Course

Rating: 4.5


The sweet murmuring river
Gliding crystal clear
Moves on her course
With energetic force.

Striving towards an end
The ultimate moment
The river on move
Crosses valleys, plains and moors.

Towards the sea she surges
With the sea she merges
Her ego she submerges
And so with glory emerges.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 07 June 2016

Lovely flow and rhyme in this poem, and great imagery as well. Very well done.

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Kanav Justa 06 January 2014

your poem flows like a river too, , , nice work, , , , loved the last four lines a lot, , Towards the sea she surges With the sea she merges Her ego she submerges And so with glory emerges

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Kanav Justa 06 January 2014

your poem flows like a river too, , , nice work, , , , loved the last four lines a lot, , Towards the sea she surges With the sea she merges Her ego she submerges And so with glory emerges

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