On Diet Poem by Abdul Rafic Rahman

On Diet

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''Am on diet, Am on diet
I need no more bite,
Am on diet, I may need a flight,
But how long will I be in the sky?
My guest has become my spur,
Deep down is where I found myself,
Without a flit.
Am on diet, Or I can quit,
Shall i forever be on diet?
Will there be my match
When Am on diet
Duration I never showed up
Later I became the new guy
because I was on diet''.

On Diet
Friday, February 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: enclosed rhyme,humanity,lyrical,rhyme royal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 16 October 2019

Write comment. Such a good start, Abdul. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 19 February 2017

Lovely sonorous piece of poetry nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Rafic.

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Abdul Rafic Rahman

Abdul Rafic Rahman

Takoradi, Western Region, Ghana.
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