Old Poet Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Old Poet

Rating: 5.0


My time is rhyming away
In these rhymes of my lays
Into a deep silence theme
With no music of forever's
Of my heart or of my soul

In this times of wrinkles
I rest in rich sweet silence
On my old long white hair
With no cry of rolling tears
That had grown old with me

In these folds on my face
Many songs are folded in
To rest in peace with me
With no sign of their ashes
Even to unfold in my rhymes

In trembling hands of mine
Words are dancing in eyes
To fly away from the sight
Of my golden white bread
That rules virtue of my rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 13 December 2009

really good, as aways :) you are very talented! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10)

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Walterrean Salley 13 December 2009

The poet may grow old, but the poetry endures for generations to enjoy. Therefore, take no song or poem with you, but share them all. Lovely poem.

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Louis Rams 13 December 2009

old poets never die, they just rhyme on.

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Antonio Liao 13 December 2009

like Roses smell no doubt, but a scent of beauty lies.... in its wonderful design...perfected by time...your poem resemblance the perfume of the Heart.... i Love it...God bless...a 10 +++++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 December 2009

This reminds me of my present old age. A good attempt.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

Blessed be the aged. The older the poet, the sweeter the rhyme; rhymes which shall not grow old with him.

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Catrina Heart 16 December 2009

Only the physical being grows old, the mind sharpens as time goes by, the heart hardens... becomes smart and confident, learned or soften....the pages written never fades beyond time...great!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 December 2009

As creative person poets never get old…wrinkled…hands may bar…thoughts and imaginations stay nimble… And you’ve portrayed that… Ms. Nivedita UK

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 December 2009

the poem is quite deep and contains figuratives and it is really good... old poets are so skilled and they are important.... very important...

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Anju Addanki 14 December 2009

a very good one just loved it.

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