Oh! My Garden
I am in Africa now
in the rock city, floating
morning fog, in home
my garden is neglected?
a grass, a tree
own likes and dislikes
growing, should be
and various rock in my garden
I ask a curved tree silently
a small grass is crying
I was hurry
What time? moved it into
I want to adopt
blue flower
a profound and peaceful flower
Where? should I put it
2006-08-02
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Jerry Hughes
Thank you very much! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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a strong sense of longing is well expressed in this lovely little poem. fine writing
'I want to adopt blue flower a profound and peaceful flower Where? should I put it' - A beautiful poem with a beautiful ending.
nostalgic feeling of home... put that blue flower on your chest and enjoy the fragrance while dreaming about home. thanks, i could understand
I have always admired how the lightness in words can bring the heaviness of meaning.Wonderfuly delightful poem about indecision and changes.I gave you a ten.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sublime start with a nice poem, Jane. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.