RENATHE PAULINUS

Rookie (25NOVEMBER1994 / RUPARA)

Oh! Death! - Poem by RENATHE PAULINUS

i'm afraid of death
i'm so scared
think about death make me mad
no, i'm afraid to die

to lay in the coffin alone
no, it sound so scary
mum, i'm afraid to die

i'm still young to die
i'm afraid of death

i'm afraid to be buried
it is dark in the grave
no, im afraid
i wish death is not exist

why must i die one day?
i'm afraid of death


Comments about Oh! Death! by RENATHE PAULINUS

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (4/21/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    At 18 it is very far away, immerse yourself with the living and fun loving, this will promote a long and happy life. The sadness expressed so simply is inevitable but so distant that you may be reassured that life is with the living, and to live is to live it well. Keep writing and watch for tenses and plurals and singulars. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Heather Wilson (4/21/2012 7:22:00 AM)

    Sad, just sad, do try to enjoy living, it`s far more fun, you wrote the poem very well though. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 15, 2012



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