making love in a
ceaseless, calm agitation—
ocean and the shore
Beautiful imagery. Yes, the way the ocean embraces the shore without end is suggestive of a great immortal love. You have captured the passion of the relationship in your beautiful haiku. (10)
making love in a ceaseless, calm agitation — ocean and the shore - - - - - - -Such a beautiful image of love in perpetuity.
A lovely imagery! When the waves lap on the shore, there is the embrace of two ardent lovers and this romance is perpetuated through this haiku.
You have presented a rich imagery of love in this exquisite and delightful piece .
Brilliant write Mihaela, I could picture the scene so vividly as the ocean and the shore making love is a stunning image!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful and well constructed Haiku. Thanks, Mihaela