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Nagourta
(10/10/2009 2:04:00 AM) |
This one was very pleasant. Well... I found it pleasant, I suppose that is a bit more accurate... Thank you so much for sharing this piece with the world, I appreciate it.: -)
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Shannon Doherty
(7/25/2009 1:37:00 PM) |
wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Kale Beaudry
(7/7/2009 1:18:00 AM) |
I loved this one... extremely well written, your comparison and allusion to the ocean creates a wild visual that compliments your message of becoming yourself with every taste, touch, smell, and thought. You are the ocean, Chloe, keep flowing.
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Sameer Ahmed
(6/29/2009 7:03:00 AM) |
Wonderful imagery portrayed with beautiful words. The freshness
of the experience you had can be imagined with calmness over-
-whelming......10/10
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
(6/17/2009 1:26:00 PM) |
Oh cHLOE, I love the imagery you had depicted.It soaked deep into my veins and will remain there for a long long time.Great writes dear!
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Betty Doyle
(6/17/2009 10:01:00 AM) |
This poem created such beautiful, vivid images
Perfect
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Travis Lepine
(6/16/2009 10:27:00 PM) |
Wow... what a poem!
I had such vivid images in my head as I read it and it gave me such a peaceful feelings as I read it.
...I hope that the poem is based on your home land of Ireland because I; m going to Dublin this month and I hope its as beautiful as your poem. Thanks
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Dans Only
(6/15/2009 6:51:00 PM) |
I really like this. There's room for improvement, but not much. Wonderful write. Loved the topic.
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