O' Life Poem by Indira Renganathan

Dazzling words! A wonderful little poem! Thanks dear madam for sharing! Stay always blessed! (10)

A brilliant write, succinct and pithy...... an apt illustration of life! A sure 10

Dear Indira Ma'm, this is a brilliant poem that captures the essence of life. Colourless nothingness out of The ephemeral beatitude. wonderfully penned.10+++

Dear madam, you have so nicely defined the life using some touching words. Capricious longing heart enjoys the rainbow colours as beatitude but it is ephemeral. A brilliant poem shared amazingly.10

Concise and poignant verse crafted with brilliance. A powerful creation. Thanks for sharing madam.

Your short poem has almost captured life in the last two lines. My poem just posted has life and non-life in its sight. My conclusions may interest you.+++10 Robert