Now Can You See? Poem by Courtney Loren

Now Can You See?



Now can you see
the pain you have caused me
and your life of a lie
that your living
sitting all alone in this dark,
dark and cold world
and our love has been
a lie all along
Now can you see
this love wasnt meant to be
and the tears that i cried
were unnecessary
i am glad you cant turn back time
cause i'd hate to see you stay
and i am more then happy
to watch you walk away!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irene Clark-hogg 05 October 2009

I am more THAN happy - line 15. Once again you present a pleasant piece of work, containing some nice rhymes. Well done. Irene

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