Nothing More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Nothing More



Something pushed me for action
It can be termed as greedy reaction
Sometimes I want beautiful woman
Sometimes lots of treasure to go on

Yes mind is not stable
That has not seen the real struggle
Only dreamed for unreal world
The sufferings have not been told

Ask for the poor man in street
How does he see full day and greet?
Sir, full hell when sun is ablaze
Hell like experience with mad chase

Truly, I realize about future
And feel sore about personal nature
Life is beautiful as well nice
Only we need to commit with promise

Nothing more is expected
Only noble aspect is to be selected
Live for self and family
But keep in mind always about almighty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

Something pushed me for action It can be termed as greedy reaction

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Sd Tiwari 28 August 2014

But always keep in mind Almighty. An inspiring poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 August 2014

noble thoughts, noble aspects, thanks,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

I like it Sarah DesRoche9 minutes ago It's creative and interesting. I like it very much.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

very studious, be tempered, prioritise William Johnson14 minutes ago Had to read it through a few times to follow.Pretty deep my friend, good job! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

For one whose first language is not English, a good effort; I like it Kent Krauss18 minutes ago Very positive outlook, especially in leaving all in God's hands in the end.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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