Nothing But Rhyme Poem by Tawnnnny Hannawi

Nothing But Rhyme

Rating: 4.5


You thought I was a rookie while your mistaken
But if u want me to continue I'm not yet taken
My rhymes used to be the worst
But now I'm about to burst
With the rhymes I got in my mind
They are like the story you ain't gonna find
Please forgive me if I suck
But if this rhyme worked it would be by luck











Thank you for reading
But I know I still suck

Sunday, May 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 29 May 2016

in poetry there's no such thing as luck and your poem do not really sucks you have the rhythm as well as rhyme keep writing and your ratings will climb! ! Thanks-10

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Tawnnnny Hannawi 29 May 2016

really appreciated

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Tawnnnny Hannawi 29 May 2016

thank you so much

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Bill Cantrell 29 May 2016

Rhymes are indeed curious elements within poetry, with me I sometimes find that I can easily over do them, the ones that makes a person stop and think..to ponder the subject matter are the small boxes with a huge treasure in them, your rhyming was clever in this poem, I enjoyed it.: -)

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Tawnnnny Hannawi 29 May 2016

thank you so much really appreciated

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