You thought I was a rookie while your mistaken
But if u want me to continue I'm not yet taken
My rhymes used to be the worst
But now I'm about to burst
With the rhymes I got in my mind
They are like the story you ain't gonna find
Please forgive me if I suck
But if this rhyme worked it would be by luck
Thank you for reading
But I know I still suck
Rhymes are indeed curious elements within poetry, with me I sometimes find that I can easily over do them, the ones that makes a person stop and think..to ponder the subject matter are the small boxes with a huge treasure in them, your rhyming was clever in this poem, I enjoyed it.: -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
in poetry there's no such thing as luck and your poem do not really sucks you have the rhythm as well as rhyme keep writing and your ratings will climb! ! Thanks-10
really appreciated
thank you so much