Notbroken Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Notbroken

Rating: 4.8


Introduction: We have two eyes, two ears, two hands, two feet but one soul. We came to this world for many purposes, for many tests. And among all the tests, we are here to find our perfect companion to make our lives actually complete and start a new expedition. Two tracks merged into one that can never be separated. And to make the ground not get cracked, we need to be that strong enough...no matter how many earthquakes drive by.


When the glowing sun will shine,
I'll start my quest to seek my fate
The moment when you will be mine,
You will know why you're so great

Now, I've tried so hard to make you realize
You really don't have to be afraid,
Of all the things you feel alive
Your soul is as elegant as a pure jade

When time comes we all have to go,
Because life never stays all frozen
And when the night falls upon your door,
I need you to be Notbroken.

When I'm gone, you be strong
I need you to wipe your tears and believe,
No matter how far away, I'm always here with you
As you're my truth, my fate, my everything...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 31 July 2011

Beautiful words from a beautiful spirit.

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Haley Akin 01 August 2011

I like that you include introductions.

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Chaths Odion 02 August 2011

This is an astonishing poem, give so much hope to them who's lives are drowning. you aid a lot of people through their darkest thoughts. it's a great thing you are doing. keep it up brother!

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Vangile Mtyali 05 August 2011

man u almost made me cry n u made me believe in true love. I love this poem so much

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2011

A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and let us learn from you as well. Thank you.

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Shamba Kaunda 04 February 2012

What a poem....you are talented be proud of your self...i rate it 10. Nyc work..Please read and comment on my new poem 'cry of a broken man'

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Ameerah Akmal 07 October 2011

WOW! thats passion...i love this poem..

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Elizabeth Codick 02 October 2011

You showed feel feelings in a deep way. I loved it

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Kara Aleid 03 September 2011

Amazing! I Love it! =)

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Anthony Zeigler 29 August 2011

The introduction is what prepares me for the poem and the poem is what puts me in love. If everything was written by you, everything will be so emotional and great. I love these piece. NICE JOB!

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